The main characters names are Thomas and Teresa. Then have gone to safe haven to get the cure. Here's what's happening right now Thomas found out that he and some of the others are immune to the Flare. He was told not to tell because someone else was suppose to. Then they were going to have to get the thing that causes the Flare out of their heads. This is in the future. The place it is at safe haven. This is happening because they been rescued by some new unknown people. This happened because they survived the Scorch Trials.
A signpost I saw when I read my book was a memory moment. It happened when Teresa, Thomas, and Aris remembered all of their past. It was before they caught the thing that caused the Flare. When it happened they were to over whelmed. Here some poof "you'll have long-term memory restored and we won't be able to manipulate your minds." This means Wicked cannot take over their minds but Thomas, Teresa, and Aris can no longer use their telepathic powers until the thing that is in their heads wears off.
Much better Jeremy. I can tell that you are editing your work and making sure your writing is clear. Just make sure that you introduce your evidence with those helpful sentence starters that we gave you!
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